Find and Write All Types Of Poetry Sonnet The Wheel of Truth Within

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We gaze above, surveying starry space;

our wonder fills the endless, sweeping sky

that rotates in persistent, patient pace

in cyclic patterns traced as planets fly.


Let's listen to bright stars' assembled sound,

a concert to express communal voice

that's found as we forever whirl around,

by trace of habit bound, if not by choice.


Life's luminosity dwells deep within;

not in the sky, but hidden in heart's core.

Sweet song of love will drown out darkness' din,

unveiling light of cosmos we adore.


No telescope nor microscope reveal

soul's grandeur in the center of life's wheel.



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After reading this again- I wanted to point out to all the newbies that this is a sonnet styled poem with alterating ryhme scheme line endings- except for the last couplet.
There are traditionally 14 lines in a sonnet.

You made it seem so easy. I still have never tried one and am humbled by your talent- bravo again- Will be looking into this more because of you- Write on-Di

 
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I totally agree with the last reviewer. Fantastic word choice and flow with images. Its just such a sweet poem and its words absorb into the reader. Great... Yardle

 
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I truly think you are one of the most talented modern poets I have read for a long time- I enjoyed this piece and think it was an easy read- I love your flare with a ryhme dosent seem forced at all- And if you ask me Integrity is a fitting name for you-

Write ON!- Di

 
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