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Waltz With the Wind Hot

 
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Wind wanders
as witness, 
harvesting 
wisdom's 
secrets 

sown from fields 
of time, roaming 

at random.

Now caressing petals 
from fragrant 
gardens, 

now running through 
rank alleyways, 
reeking with refuse; 

enchanted not by one, 
undisturbed by the other- 

simply a spectator. 

Autumn leaves 
waltz with the wind. 

November gold


falls 


a departing yellow flutter 

(one last weightless laugh). 

Scraps of city newsprint 
flutter hither


and thither 
among traveling trails

of restless currents. 

Wind encounters 
countless cohorts 
and plays the game of 
life 
with 
blissful abandon.

Capriciously chatting in whispers, 
sometimes swelling to a shout 

or
howling,
bellowing, 
whistling, roaring 
singing, scolding, 
weeping, 
adoring;

sometimes lilting, sweeping 
and soaring 

sighing, murmuring, 
healing, restoring.

Evening, 
communing with stars, 
winking friends, 

akin to the vastness



from which all breath, all breeze is born, 
to which each gust returns 

and rests in eternity.


 



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The ever eventful wind... Ahhh it swells here and shows its magnificent power with the writers words of imagery in this poem. It reminded me of the manytimes I thought how sweet the feel of a breeze on the sweating brow- and again how distructful when sweeping trash everywhere-
The force of nature that niether is enchanted nor disturbed but just is...
Excellant write-
Write ON!- Di

 
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Hi... again this is really nice.. images... took me into the stories many different areas and each with a mood and then circle going and coming from the main source.. Your writing is hard to measure in numbers... you are one ... seeking... wondering... how nice it is to read your things... Ben

 
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